November 9, 2009

  • KMSG
    English 101
    8 November 2009
    Recycling Versus Garbage
    Recycling has become a common and popular practice among people today. Companies remind customers to recycle their products, businesses have designated bins scattered throughout their buildings, and average citizens can help start their programs for their communities. But despite all positive claims people make for recycling and the increase in participation, is recycling truly beneficial? The question immerging today is whether recycling is an effective response to waste from an environmental, economical, and personal standpoint.
    Environmentalist’s main objective is to help earth by saving resources and avoiding as much waste as possible. They claim that recycling reduces pollution, saves resources, and eases the impact people make on the environment. Recycling cans takes less than a quarter of energy to make new aluminum cans than using virgin ore (qtd in Martin 103). Sam Martin illustrates the benefits of recycling by explaining that “If all morning newspapers read around the country were recycled, 41,000 trees would be saved daily and 6 million tons of waste would never end up in landfills” (107). On the other hand, Tierney argues “recycling newsprint creates more water pollution than making new paper: for each ton of recycled newsprint that’s produced, an extra 5,000 gallons of waste water are discharged”. Also, most trees are planted for the intention of harvesting and there is a market incentive for private landowners to replant trees- almost three million acres every year (Reed 155). Those opposed to recycling dispute that it does not reduce pollution and actually wastes resources. Recycling requires more trucks for curbside pickup which results in air and noise pollution. Anti-recyclers also argue that we produce twice as much output per unit of energy as we did 50 years ago and we use less resources due to improved engineering (Benjamin 79). The energy consumed to manufacture a mug and wash it is so much more than the manufacturing of a disposable cup that it would take 1,000 uses before the mug’s energy-consumption-per-use is equal to the cup (Tierney).
    The economics of recycling is another issue both environmentalists and anti-recyclers face. While recycling is a more expensive process, making and maintaining landfills is also very costly. The demand and value for recycled items is very low- many states have to pay in order to get rid of their recycled matter. But for other states, landfill fees are high, it is costly to transport the garbage to a distant location, and it is cheaper to recycle at a plant that is nearby. Tierney points out that recycling programs require administrators, campaigns to explain the rules, enforcement agents, and extra collection workers and vehicles. He also notes that collecting a ton of recyclable items is three times more expensive than collecting a ton of garbage. The market price for recycled materials is so low that some cities have to pay private recyclers to take it off their hands. On the other hand, recyclers insist that if communities treated recycling as a replacement instead of an add-on to disposal systems, split the collection crew in half, and replaced half its collection days with collection of recyclables, recycling would be a much more cost-effective and successful system (Platt). When communities recycle in high levels, it costs less than trash collection and disposal. Recycling also creates more jobs than landfills and incinerators, for things such as building recycling centers, sorting, and recycling-based manufacturing.
    Personal attitudes towards recycling are a critical contribution to its effectiveness. The more participation, the more cost-efficient and environmentally-friendly recycling is. One difficult problem recycling faces is many people view recycling as forced labor. It is a time consuming and occasionally gross activity when the recycling involves rinsing out materials. In contrast to the “forced laborers”, others consider recycling a morally uplifting activity and enjoy having a cause to contribute to.
    The choice to recycle can be based off of several decisions. Efforts to save resources and energy can be argued from both sides, with more support for some materials and practices than others. Money –your tax dollars– is an additional criteria that mainly depends on the area. Lastly, participation and personal convictions affect the effectiveness of recycling. Chaz Miller, an editor of Recycling Times, says “There’s been a messianic zeal that’s hurt the cause. The American public loves recycling, but we have to do it efficiently. It should be a business, not a religion” (qtd in Tierney). Now the American public has to decide whether they should recycle based on their belief systems concerning the environment and marketing.

    Works Cited
    Benjamin, Daniel. "The Benefits of Recycling Are a Myth." Garbage and Recycling. Ed.
    Mitchell Young. San Diego: Greenhaven Press, 2007. 79-80. Print.
    Martin, Sam. "Recycling Can Reduce Pollution." The Environment. Ed. Laura K. Egendorf.
    Farmington Hills, MI: Greenhaven Press, 2005. 103-07. Print.
    Platt, Brenda. "The Five Most Dangerous Myths About Recycling." The Benefits of Recycling
    Are a Myth. Institute for Local Self-Reliance, Sept. 1996. Web.
    Opposing Viewpoints Resource Center. MCC-Blue River Library. 19 Oct. 2009
    .
    Reed, Lawrence. "Recycling Is Often Wasteful." Garbage and Waste. Ed. Bruno Leone, et al.
    San Diego: Greenhaven Press, 1997. 155-56. Print.
    Tierney, John. "Recycling Is Garbage." The New York Times 30 June 1996. Web. Opposing
    Viewpoints Resource Center. MCC-Blue River Library. 19 Oct. 2009
    .

Comments (1)

  • Notation: S = sentence P = paragraph

    First read: Grammar and punctuation.

    "The question immerging today is whether"
    "immerging" should be emerging. S3 P1

    "Environmentalist's"
    This should be either "Environmentalists'" or "An environmentalist's" S1 P2

    Earth needs to be capitalized. S1 P2

    S3 P2 "quarter of energy to make" should be "quarter of the energy required to make"

    Silly use of a colon, but it's not yours so keep it. Just wanted to call it silly.

    Ugh, Tierney is practically illiterate... are instead of is...

    S5 P2 The period after Tiernay's quote needs to be inside the marks, since it ended the sentence.

    Hyphens are technically two dashes.

    S7 P2 you need to not use dispute because it makes it sound as if the people against recycling are disputing that pollution is increased, or as you have it "does not reduce pollution."

    S8 P2 is an unsupported assumption. Recycling in KC and Independence requires people to go to a recycling center, which arguable creates less pollution than a fleet of trucks. Point is, not all schemes have trucks making rounds.

    Now that I look at it, it looks like a paraphrase. Poop. I hate paraphrases. Hate. Seriously, visceral, ripping hate.
    Keep it though, teachers love them. Heathens.

    Love not recycling? Then you love red herrings too! Apparently...

    BACK TO GRAMMA

    S3 P3 Hyphens are TWO dashes. At least my grammar handbook tells me that. -shrugs-

    S3-4 P3 Shouldn't start a sentence with a conjunction. Use a comma, or better yet, a semi-colon, or drop but altogether.

    S4 P3 the comma following high should be replaced with a period, lest you be dinged for a comma splice. Semi-colon works too. And looks cooler. And I just like semi-colons.

    Enforcement agents? HA. HAHA. AHHHHHHHHAHAHAHAHA. Tard.

    S3 P5 -your tax dollars- should be minus the half-hyphens and put in parentheses since it doesn't flow with the rest of the sentence. hyphens are for emphasis, not asides. Well, maybe a comma separation would do better, since parentheses technically de-emphasize.

    SECOND READ: CONTENT

    Tierney is an idiot.
    Also, s/he never presents any facts to back things up.
    At least, if s/he did, you didn't include them.
    Maybe it's just my bias, but your essay reads like this.

    Paragraph 1: let's be impartial!
    Paragraphs 2 + 3: Here are tree haters and their insane claims, and here are some reasonable environmentalists practically ignoring them and just saying things.
    Paragraph 4: People are afraid of water and plastic bottles.
    Paragraph 5: Both sides are slinging crap at each other directly and saying they're the best. Now you decide, do you want mossy crap, or cardboard crap?

    Also, that quote from the guy in Recycling times is odd. It makes recycling sound like communism. If only it were implemented properly, you'll see, it can work! I promise!

    Calling the two groups environmentalists and anti-recyclers puts a stigma on both of them. the best would be pro- and anti- recyclists or recyclers, since in some eyes environmentalist has certain connotations that could be both favourable or unfavourable. Beyond that, environmentalism is more than recycling, and not all environmentalists are pro-recycling.

    Your works cited looks good, except you have a bunch of stuff about where you accessed the information, and that seems superfluous. Still, if your teach is requiring it, they're wrong, I think, but keep it anyway. Dignity is less valuable than grade points at this moment.

    Oh, and in case you couldn't tell, you did a god job, just a bit of it might not necessarily mean what you want it to mean.

    Also, "The demand and value for recycled items is very low- many states have to pay in order to get rid of their recycled matter." and "The market price for recycled materials is so low that some cities have to pay private recyclers to take it off their hands." is redundant.
    Slice one of them I say.

    ALSO, "When communities recycle in high levels, it costs less than trash collection and disposal."
    Proof? It's not cited, so it's your words. You didn't mention it before so it's not an explanation.
    If you leave it as it is, it's conjecture.

    -Jessy

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